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(Warnings: General insanity)

I'm scared. The only reason I'm sharing this with you is because I'm scared. I don't know if it's really a good idea to share it honestly. Something may happen to me if I do. Or worse something may happen to you.

I invited Cry over today for some gaming since he's visiting up this way right now. I...I still feel uneasy just thinking about it. I've been seeing more of them than ever before. I see that damned pale white face in the trees more and more. I don't know what to do anymore. I think somehow he got into the house today. I don't know how but I swear he did.

I had been sitting at my computer with my back to the room. I don't remember exactly what I was looking at but most of the screen was black. I had my headphones on so I couldn't really hear anything either. Well I was fine until something moved out of the corner of my eye. It was a reflection on the screen. I wish I hadn't noticed it. I'm so afraid they will figure out that I know they are there.

My heart jumped but I didn't dare move. I didn't want to even breathe. I was staring at the reflection of a pale white face. I could feel myself start to tremble as I sat there. No. Stop shaking! I couldn't will myself to stop as my eyes stayed locked onto it. I guess whatever it was found this amusing. I watched as a wide grin spread over that things face.

That damned grin. I wish I could forget it. Forget the way it made my skin crawl as I sat there frozen. Teeth easily showed as its gaze stayed pinned to me. I could almost imagine that smile turning into something malevolent. My chest felt heavy and the sound of my racing heart rang in my ears. I couldn't find it in myself to move. My breath trembled even though I tried to hide it.

This couldn't be happening. This couldn't be real. It had to be a dream. I only wished it had been though. I was awake. I knew I was. My eyes started to tear as I sat there watching it. I could feel my trembling getting a little worse. Was I going to die like this? In those games...the person almost always died. I felt a slight surge of panic as my vision blurred from the unshed tears. It knew I knew. I closed my eyes tightly in an attempt to block out the thoughts of a painful death. My body stiff from waiting for something to happen. I couldn't do this anymore!

I spun around finally, my eyes wide as the few stray tears fell. If I was going to die I would do it staring that thing down. My breath hitching as my eyes cleared of the hazy blur. I felt a flush cover my cheeks though as I started to breathe again.

Cry was standing there just staring at me like I was out of my mind. I was really freaked out but I tried to play it off.

"Oh man, don't scare me like that. I...I was playing a new horror game. I guess it got the better of me." I tried to hold my voice steady. Thankfully Cry smiled at me. He chuckled after that.

"Sorry, man. Well, let’s play then." He sat down next to me in the chair I had pulled up. When he sat down though...I swear he was wearing the same smile I had seen before. I knew that wasn't possible though. Cry's face could never be that pale white. He wasn't the type to wear masks.
Hey guys,

I couldn't resist doing another work. I intend there to be a companion piece to this so this is only the first part. Paranoia, how you mess with people. Lol. Written from Pews POV for the week 4 prompt give by :iconhorror-writers-unite:

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Shadowbuscus Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Awesome story by the way I love you'r stories but you make it harder to sleep at night!
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l1k3gh0sts Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2013  Hobbyist
Lol. Thank you so much! I'm glad in a not creepy way. :D I love horror so writing this stuff is probably far too easy for me. I absolutely love this stuff.
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Shadowbuscus Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Hey I want you to help me on something about horror stories. Does it makes it more terrifying adding yourself into the story?? I really need help with that because I have some ideas but I don't know if to put myself in the story or a character. Can you give me an advice?
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l1k3gh0sts Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2013  Hobbyist
No prob. I don't mind answering any questions you have. :D So when it comes to horror writing there are a good many ways to keep it creepy. When it comes to the first person vs third it's up for debate. What I find most successful is what style works best for you. First person is good when it comes to making someone feel they are involved in it. However, third person can draw someone in just as easily. Try it both ways and see what works with you best. If you like I am more than happy to read it over for you?
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LillytheHedgehog19 Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013  Student Artist
MAD Cry i-I-is t-t-that y-y-you? *Holds CRY doll* crys
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l1k3gh0sts Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013  Hobbyist
:tighthug: I'm glad you liked it! It's strange to say but it's awesome when your stories scare people. I have been itching to write new stories for both Cry and Pewds. Strictly from the horror aspect that is. They make it so much fun.
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LillytheHedgehog19 Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013  Student Artist
Your wellcome Mr./Mrs.gh0sts!~ Lilly and Female kid Cry =)
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KittyLove657 Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
I'm shaking right now
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l1k3gh0sts Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013  Hobbyist
Then I have done my job correctly. Lol. :tighthug: Its all good. Just stories. I'm glad you liked it though!
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KittyLove657 Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
I don't want to see the face
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