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(Warnings: General Insanity)

Everyone has secrets. Sometimes they have secrets they don't even know about. They are the things we force ourselves to forget. I only wish I could forget them now that the voices have become quiet.

Everyone always seems to think that I'm just a normal person. I swear to you that I can be. It's hard sometimes though when they start talking again. You don't know what it's like to always have them watching you.

Sometimes I see them in mirrors. All of our pale white faces make it hard to know which one is which. And sometimes I can't tell the difference between their voices and mine. Do you want to know what they're like? There can be so many of them that I will only tell you about the main ones.

I call this one Mad. Why? Because he does things that don't make sense to me sometimes. He's wild and angry. He usually only talks to me when things have fallen apart. He tells me things. Tells me to hurt people. He tells me the truth about others, you know. He makes me safe but he scares me. Sometimes he wants me to hurt myself. He screams at me. I don't like him when he’s like that. He is so handsome though.

The next one I suppose would be called Virus. He is nothing like Mad. He's more dangerous. He's the one who tells me how to hurt things. He doesn't like blood like Mad does. He just wants to make them break. Sometimes he hurts me too. He makes me do bad things. He made me hurt them. I don't like Virus. He is so mean to me. His eyes scare me sometimes. He is usually calm and can manipulate people easily. He corrupts them so he can keep them for himself he says.

There is another one that makes me think I may be a little less normal than others. I think her name is best kept to her sex, Fem. She is a handful in a different way from any of the others. She makes me feel good. She reminds me how handsome I am. She always tells me how lovely my voice is. She is so sexy. I think I may love her. If nothing else I would at least like to touch her. Fem makes my head foggy at times though. That makes me act weird towards some of my friends.

I have to go. They want me to play a game with them. I don't mind doing that because they do keep me company. Maybe later I'll tell you more about them. Like I said earlier, I really am very normal. They always tell me so.
I thought it would be fun to do a little fan piece for a writing prompt from :iconhorror-writers-unite:. The prompt requested we write about secrets that haunt us. I have been sitting on this idea for a while and finally decided to put it to use. It's written from ChaoticMonki's point of view on the different 'sides' of himself. I thought this would be something fun to write since there are so many fan pieces of mad!cry, virus!cry, and fem!cry out there. Just a little horror fiction. Now if only he would read it. Lol. *shot*

Hope you liked it!
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LoveyouCry Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I love this!! I never rally knew much about Viruse, but this gives him a personality. This is really good 
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l1k3gh0sts Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2013  Hobbyist
Thank you so much! I really wanted to focus on the characters as a different part of the broken psyche. I thought it was important for the stronger personalities to really have strong characteristics. I'm just lame that way. Lol.
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dyingflames Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2013
As I'm reading through this, I'm picturing it being read in Cry's voice. His "Cry Reads" voice that just has that solid, deep and...almost haunting tone to it. I would like to hear him do this for one of his "Cry Reads."
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l1k3gh0sts Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2013  Hobbyist
Right! I can only imagine the effect it would have then. But alas. I have no way to ask him. Lol.
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dyingflames Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2013
Yeah, that's a big shame. Plus we never know the reaction he would have to it. He mentioned once about how it upset when people would write certain things about him or his family. But I don't think this would upset him at all. Just an interesting take on different emotions he has.
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LoveyouCry Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
me too!  someone should send this to Cry
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LillytheHedgehog19 Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013  Student Artist
Man I thought I made a female cry Wait I made a female kid cry, she reminds cry of childhood there now im happy=)
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l1k3gh0sts Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013  Hobbyist
Very nice. Fem is definitely Cry's protective side for sure. She does many things for him in a much gentler way then Mad. Mad takes care of him but tends to be much more forceful with others.
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LillytheHedgehog19 Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013  Student Artist
Female kid cry:thanks for the complment Mr./Mrs.gh0sts :D
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l1k3gh0sts Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013  Hobbyist
Lol. No prob. Oh and you can call me l1k3 (like). I'm a miss by the way. :D
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LillytheHedgehog19 Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013  Student Artist
Female kid cry(Cryla):ok miss l1k3 :D
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KahokoHino-EEVEE Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2013
This story... Oh. My. God. You blew my mind. OAO
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l1k3gh0sts Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2013  Hobbyist
I'm glad you liked it! I can't help myself. Love this sort of thing. Lol.
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Shadowbuscus Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
:iconmotherofgod-plz:
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l1k3gh0sts Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2013  Hobbyist
Lol. I take it you liked this then. I'm glad. I like stories of insanity. :D
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Shadowbuscus Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Meh too! :3 i will make some myself.
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l1k3gh0sts Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2013  Hobbyist
Awesome. I'm currently working on one. Can't wait to see what you have in store for us!
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Shadowbuscus Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Yeah! but uhm... can yo help me with something? if you can when i try to upload a story it does not let me pick a category. :( it says "that category doesn't allow this type of deviation" can you tell me what to choose when i am choosing a category? cause i am stuck :cry:
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l1k3gh0sts Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2013  Hobbyist
I can try and help. That's an odd error message. Just let me know what the story is and I'll see if I can't help. :nod:
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Shadowbuscus Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Done did it!
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Shadowbuscus Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
:motherofgod-plz:
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Shadowbuscus Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Sorry i am new to deviant :( motherofgod-plz
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wolflove342 Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2013  Student General Artist
:iconmotherofgod-plz:
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l1k3gh0sts Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2013  Hobbyist
Lol. I take it you liked it?
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wolflove342 Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2013  Student General Artist
YES 
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l1k3gh0sts Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2013  Hobbyist
Very good. I'm glad :D. Lol. It was fun to write for sure.
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wolflove342 Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2013  Student General Artist
:iconlaplz: I bet it was.
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l1k3gh0sts Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2013  Hobbyist
I love this sort of stuff so I can get easily caught up in it. I'm going to do more based on the same concept for this story. :D
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wolflove342 Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013  Student General Artist
:icondramaticplz: OMG I can't wait!
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l1k3gh0sts Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013  Hobbyist
Hopefully I'll have something done by today. :D
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chromeantennae Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This piece is quite interesting, indeed. :nod:

I really liked the description of these......emotions and feelings. Especially "Fem," when this character was describing how this female.......entity made his head feel foggy. (Which immediately made me think of lust and how it clouds up people's mind) Overall, I really enjoyed this. :D
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l1k3gh0sts Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2013  Hobbyist
Thank you so much! You have been so kind! I really appreciate it. :tighthug:
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chromeantennae Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
My pleasure. :D
:tighthug:
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PrincessOfMaggots Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2013
I'll translate it to german and record it for Youtube.
I'll credit you ^w^
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l1k3gh0sts Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2013  Hobbyist
Aw well thank you!!! I am so happy you liked it enough to do that! I was thinking of doing a read on it myself but I feel I lack the ability to read this one well. Feel free to do as you like as long as I'm credited for it! You made my day! :tighthug: :happybounce:
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PrincessOfMaggots Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2013
You're welcome ^w^
It's awesome!

Glad I made your day c:

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l1k3gh0sts Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2013  Hobbyist
Send me a link when it's done! I may not understand it but I would love to watch it anyway. Lol. I'm a dork that way. T^T :iconletmehugyouplz:
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PrincessOfMaggots Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2013
Okay it will be ready tomorrow, I suppose  :D
Dorks are awesome xD
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l1k3gh0sts Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2013  Hobbyist
Haha. Agreed. :D I can't wait to get a look at it! Mind if I post a link to it on my DA and on my YouTube when it's done?
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PrincessOfMaggots Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2013
Nah it's okay :D
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l1k3gh0sts Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2013  Hobbyist
I like to help others get a little love considering I'm still new myself. :D
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Little-Brittle Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
That's awesome but to me sad I understand 100% dude :iconitalyhugsjapanplz: * hug*
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l1k3gh0sts Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2013  Hobbyist
:tighthug: Thanks. Lol.
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Little-Brittle Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
your welcome friend ^^
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yukarilolz Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2013
Oh my goodness, this is epic. When I read the title I right away thought of Cry but thought that the title just meant sadness. I really like this Idea!! Beautiful work here!!
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l1k3gh0sts Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2013  Hobbyist
You are too kind! Thank you very much. I am working on the title. I hate giving straight forward titles usually but I just can't think of anything that fit better. I'm really glad you like it. :tighthug:
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Firestarawesome Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is...

:iconsobplz:

Amazing ;;
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l1k3gh0sts Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2013  Hobbyist
Lol. Thanks. It's just a little prompt work. I like to write a lot and horror is my game. This one didn't take that long since I try to limit the time on prompts. I'm so glad you like it! :glomp: :tighthug:
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Shadowbuscus Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
IT kinda makes me want to cry! Hey you are an inspiration so i will make some pastas! and put you in the description as an inspiration for the pastas that i'll make i love your work don't stop! :tight hug:
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l1k3gh0sts Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2013  Hobbyist
Ah thank you!! :iconletmehugyouplz: I would it if you did that! I'm glad I gave you a little food for thought! You are far to kind. :D
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