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(Warnings: General Insanity)

Everyone has secrets. Sometimes they have secrets they don't even know about. They are the things we force ourselves to forget. I only wish I could forget them now that the voices have become quiet.

Everyone always seems to think that I'm just a normal person. I swear to you that I can be. It's hard sometimes though when they start talking again. You don't know what it's like to always have them watching you.

Sometimes I see them in mirrors. All of our pale white faces make it hard to know which one is which. And sometimes I can't tell the difference between their voices and mine. Do you want to know what they're like? There can be so many of them that I will only tell you about the main ones.

I call this one Mad. Why? Because he does things that don't make sense to me sometimes. He's wild and angry. He usually only talks to me when things have fallen apart. He tells me things. Tells me to hurt people. He tells me the truth about others, you know. He makes me safe but he scares me. Sometimes he wants me to hurt myself. He screams at me. I don't like him when he’s like that. He is so handsome though.

The next one I suppose would be called Virus. He is nothing like Mad. He's more dangerous. He's the one who tells me how to hurt things. He doesn't like blood like Mad does. He just wants to make them break. Sometimes he hurts me too. He makes me do bad things. He made me hurt them. I don't like Virus. He is so mean to me. His eyes scare me sometimes. He is usually calm and can manipulate people easily. He corrupts them so he can keep them for himself he says.

There is another one that makes me think I may be a little less normal than others. I think her name is best kept to her sex, Fem. She is a handful in a different way from any of the others. She makes me feel good. She reminds me how handsome I am. She always tells me how lovely my voice is. She is so sexy. I think I may love her. If nothing else I would at least like to touch her. Fem makes my head foggy at times though. That makes me act weird towards some of my friends.

I have to go. They want me to play a game with them. I don't mind doing that because they do keep me company. Maybe later I'll tell you more about them. Like I said earlier, I really am very normal. They always tell me so.
I thought it would be fun to do a little fan piece for a writing prompt from :iconhorror-writers-unite:. The prompt requested we write about secrets that haunt us. I have been sitting on this idea for a while and finally decided to put it to use. It's written from ChaoticMonki's point of view on the different 'sides' of himself. I thought this would be something fun to write since there are so many fan pieces of mad!cry, virus!cry, and fem!cry out there. Just a little horror fiction. Now if only he would read it. Lol. *shot*

Hope you liked it!
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LoveyouCry Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I love this!! I never rally knew much about Viruse, but this gives him a personality. This is really good 
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l1k3gh0sts Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2013  Hobbyist
Thank you so much! I really wanted to focus on the characters as a different part of the broken psyche. I thought it was important for the stronger personalities to really have strong characteristics. I'm just lame that way. Lol.
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dyingflames Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2013
As I'm reading through this, I'm picturing it being read in Cry's voice. His "Cry Reads" voice that just has that solid, deep and...almost haunting tone to it. I would like to hear him do this for one of his "Cry Reads."
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l1k3gh0sts Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2013  Hobbyist
Right! I can only imagine the effect it would have then. But alas. I have no way to ask him. Lol.
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dyingflames Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2013
Yeah, that's a big shame. Plus we never know the reaction he would have to it. He mentioned once about how it upset when people would write certain things about him or his family. But I don't think this would upset him at all. Just an interesting take on different emotions he has.
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LoveyouCry Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
me too!  someone should send this to Cry
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LillytheHedgehog19 Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013  Student Artist
Man I thought I made a female cry Wait I made a female kid cry, she reminds cry of childhood there now im happy=)
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l1k3gh0sts Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013  Hobbyist
Very nice. Fem is definitely Cry's protective side for sure. She does many things for him in a much gentler way then Mad. Mad takes care of him but tends to be much more forceful with others.
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LillytheHedgehog19 Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013  Student Artist
Female kid cry:thanks for the complment Mr./Mrs.gh0sts :D
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l1k3gh0sts Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013  Hobbyist
Lol. No prob. Oh and you can call me l1k3 (like). I'm a miss by the way. :D
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