(Warnings: General Insanity)
Everyone has secrets. Sometimes they have secrets they don't even know about. They are the things we force ourselves to forget. I only wish I could forget them now that the voices have become quiet.
Everyone always seems to think that I'm just a normal person. I swear to you that I can be. It's hard sometimes though when they start talking again. You don't know what it's like to always have them watching you.
Sometimes I see them in mirrors. All of our pale white faces make it hard to know which one is which. And sometimes I can't tell the difference between their voices and mine. Do you want to know what they're like? There can be so many of them that I will only tell you about the main ones.
I call this one Mad. Why? Because he does things that don't make sense to me sometimes. He's wild and angry. He usually only talks to me when things have fallen apart. He tells me things. Tells me to hurt people. He tells me the truth about others, you know. He makes me safe but he scares me. Sometimes he wants me to hurt myself. He screams at me. I don't like him when he’s like that. He is so handsome though.
The next one I suppose would be called Virus. He is nothing like Mad. He's more dangerous. He's the one who tells me how to hurt things. He doesn't like blood like Mad does. He just wants to make them break. Sometimes he hurts me too. He makes me do bad things. He made me hurt them. I don't like Virus. He is so mean to me. His eyes scare me sometimes. He is usually calm and can manipulate people easily. He corrupts them so he can keep them for himself he says.
There is another one that makes me think I may be a little less normal than others. I think her name is best kept to her sex, Fem. She is a handful in a different way from any of the others. She makes me feel good. She reminds me how handsome I am. She always tells me how lovely my voice is. She is so sexy. I think I may love her. If nothing else I would at least like to touch her. Fem makes my head foggy at times though. That makes me act weird towards some of my friends.
I have to go. They want me to play a game with them. I don't mind doing that because they do keep me company. Maybe later I'll tell you more about them. Like I said earlier, I really am very normal. They always tell me so.
I thought it would be fun to do a little fan piece for a writing prompt from . The prompt requested we write about secrets that haunt us. I have been sitting on this idea for a while and finally decided to put it to use. It's written from ChaoticMonki's point of view on the different 'sides' of himself. I thought this would be something fun to write since there are so many fan pieces of mad!cry, virus!cry, and fem!cry out there. Just a little horror fiction. Now if only he would read it. Lol. *shot*
Hope you liked it!
Hope you liked it!
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I love this!! I never rally knew much about Viruse, but this gives him a personality. This is really good
Thank you so much! I really wanted to focus on the characters as a different part of the broken psyche. I thought it was important for the stronger personalities to really have strong characteristics. I'm just lame that way. Lol.
As I'm reading through this, I'm picturing it being read in Cry's voice. His "Cry Reads" voice that just has that solid, deep and...almost haunting tone to it. I would like to hear him do this for one of his "Cry Reads."
Right! I can only imagine the effect it would have then. But alas. I have no way to ask him. Lol.
Yeah, that's a big shame. Plus we never know the reaction he would have to it. He mentioned once about how it upset when people would write certain things about him or his family. But I don't think this would upset him at all. Just an interesting take on different emotions he has.
me too! someone should send this to Cry
Man I thought I made a female cry Wait I made a female kid cry, she reminds cry of childhood there now im happy
Very nice. Fem is definitely Cry's protective side for sure. She does many things for him in a much gentler way then Mad. Mad takes care of him but tends to be much more forceful with others.
This story... Oh. My. God. You blew my mind. OAO
Lol. I take it you liked this then. I'm glad. I like stories of insanity.
Meh too! :3 i will make some myself.
Awesome. I'm currently working on one. Can't wait to see what you have in store for us!
Yeah! but uhm... can yo help me with something? if you can when i try to upload a story it does not let me pick a category. it says "that category doesn't allow this type of deviation" can you tell me what to choose when i am choosing a category? cause i am stuck
Done did it!
Lol. I take it you liked it?
This piece is quite interesting, indeed.
I really liked the description of these......emotions and feelings. Especially "Fem," when this character was describing how this female.......entity made his head feel foggy. (Which immediately made me think of lust and how it clouds up people's mind) Overall, I really enjoyed this.
I'll translate it to german and record it for Youtube.
I'll credit you ^w^
Aw well thank you!!! I am so happy you liked it enough to do that! I was thinking of doing a read on it myself but I feel I lack the ability to read this one well. Feel free to do as you like as long as I'm credited for it! You made my day!
You're welcome ^w^It's awesome!
Glad I made your day c:
Okay it will be ready tomorrow, I suppose
Dorks are awesome xD
Oh my goodness, this is epic. When I read the title I right away thought of Cry but thought that the title just meant sadness. I really like this Idea!! Beautiful work here!!
You are too kind! Thank you very much. I am working on the title. I hate giving straight forward titles usually but I just can't think of anything that fit better. I'm really glad you like it.
Lol. Thanks. It's just a little prompt work. I like to write a lot and horror is my game. This one didn't take that long since I try to limit the time on prompts. I'm so glad you like it!
IT kinda makes me want to cry! Hey you are an inspiration so i will make some pastas! and put you in the description as an inspiration for the pastas that i'll make i love your work don't stop! :tight hug: